yuck poem

lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i look at the picture and i know im a killer
i hear the words and i know i am crazy
i feel my names and the way theyve been used
these spiritual blessings being you<they arent you>

and therye not you know
im sure you stand with your own
but youve done some major damage here
and still the bombs havent even dropped yet
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • Yeah, that sure sounds like some yuck feelings, lovin' kind! You expressed them very well! :) I like it, it's kinda creepy and I dig creepy. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    lovin kind wrote:
    i look at the picture and i know im a killer
    i hear the words and i know i am crazy
    i feel my names and the way theyve been used
    these spiritual blessings being you<they arent you>

    and therye not you know
    im sure you stand with your own
    but youve done some major damage here
    and still the bombs havent even dropped yet
    Very "manson-ish."
    and I dont mean shirley....
    nice...dark...spooky... and intriguing....

    well-done chap:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • love whispers through his soul
    all is not lost
    heaven sends a smile your way
    think of someone you know there
    and rest in the wings of your guardian
    love is free
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    love whispers through his soul
    all is not lost
    heaven sends a smile your way
    think of someone you know there
    and rest in the wings of your guardian
    Sweet Midnight tunes.
    And....
    Thank you for that...::;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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