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lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the light shines from the farthest star
the sinking boat ascends out of the deep
the ocean dissapears into the air
and the clouds become overflowing stables of rain

falling
raising us up
showing the hope
covered in love

i found a few years lying around
in the journals saving was found
we were all bound

falling
raising us up
showing the faith
covered in love
covered in hope
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Mmmmm, that was so warm and fuzzy, lovin' kind! :)

    "i found a few years lying around
    in the journals saving was found
    we were all bound" -- this part especially, ROCKS! :) The wording is awesome!

    THIS is a great poem! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    is awesome
    thanks

    you made me feel good
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • EvilToasterElfEvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    One of the best books of poetry I've ever read, "Rising and Falling" by William Mathews, thanks for reminding me
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