beginning of a poet try

lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i can see the light i suppose that we all do
but i cant feel the end
i wanna go with you

blue is her favorite color
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    It's short and sweet. Nice work.
  • from a world so far away
    i can feel that love
    its burning bright within the stars
    its falling down on all our hearts
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • is like getting to know everyone
    its like i know you

    maybe im not suppost to?
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • why would i go wanna go
    because i love god
    because we belong to god
    because its my love to make sure you know your loved

    its true
    its innocent
    its honest

    i pray that everyone are angels
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • That would be beautiful if
    we are all angels....I like to
    believe that too

    I understand that I am supposed
    to feel the pain
    I understand that I am supposed
    to feel the joy
    Life is equal amounts of both

    Hang in there --love will play games with your mind :)
    love is free
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    lovin kind wrote:
    from a world so far away
    i can feel that love
    its burning bright within the stars
    its falling down on all our hearts


    That's really pretty.
  • lovin kind wrote:
    blue is her favorite color

    did you "borrow" that one from somewhere?
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • lovin kind wrote:
    i can see the light i suppose that we all do
    but i cant feel the end
    i wanna go with you

    blue is her favorite color

    There is no more beautiful music
    than the beat of your approaching steps
    and the scent I catch
    from the wind, as your hair passes my face
  • lovin kind wrote:
    from a world so far away
    i can feel that love
    its burning bright within the stars
    its falling down on all our hearts

    we catch it on our tongues
    feel it seep into our souls
    we are as one
    we are whole

    :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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