the volume of war

lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
ripped into my soul
took me to land i thought id never see
alone and scared of imagination
waiting for what now i have

love is a poem thats written for me
love is the hand attached to the wing
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • campaigning for love for a message
    waiting with little time in hand
    happy yet wondering why
    when im here im with you
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I really like your little poems. They say so much and are so positive.
  • i wishlist i could sustain some kind of feeling with my writes
    i think when i was younger i wrote better poems
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    lovin kind wrote:
    i wishlist i could sustain some kind of feeling with my writes
    i think when i was younger i wrote better poems

    The ones you write now are just fine. I enjoy reading them.
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