poem

lovin kind

the daylight dissapeared while i was thinking of you
now i look out the window and dream of being home
praying for love to rain down forever

the burden between now and then flicker in the window
im scared to stop and im scared to go
i know i need to leave but i cherish this moment
now as it goes
now as its gone
love is electricity in a building that covers our worries
the cold outside is a blessing but i dont want to stay
the clothing i received and the food that nourishes me

i just cant believe how beautiful you are

FinsburyParkCarrots

Now that's gorgeous.

It reminds me of "Late Night" by Syd Barrett:


When I woke up today
and you weren't there to play
then I wanted to be with you
when you showed me your eyes
whispered love at the skies
then I wanted to stay with you
inside me I feel alone and unreal
and the way you kiss will always be
a very special thing to me...

When I lay still at night seeing
stars high and light
then I wanted to be with you
when the rooftops shone dark
all alone (I) saw a spark
spark of love just to stay with you
inside me I feel alone and unreal
and the way you kiss will always be
a very special thing to me...

If I mention your name
turn around on a chain
then the sky opens for you
when we grew very tall
when I saw you so small
then I wanted to stay with you
inside me I feel alone and unreal
and the way you kiss will always be
a very special thing to me...

Righteous Jammer

your words gave me tears in my eyes....touching, very touching poem

lovin kind

im feeling numb about right now

being in the same place at the same time

i agree syd can write

twin2

That's really pretty. I like it.