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bottle of wine

lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
in an empty room
with a million things to do
the apartment is trashed
and im thinking about you

unopened poem the future ahead
football on television
play maddens instead
im the reason
im the reason
im the reason

shes leavin here
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    WOW....lost for words...
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    beautiful.:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Righteous JammerRighteous Jammer Posts: 509
    Love love love that title, and poem of course
    It doesnt hurt.... when I bleed
    but memories...they eat me
    I've seen it all before,...
    bring it on cause I'm no victim.
    -Ghost
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Nice work.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    I liked this, lovin kind. :) It's very real.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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