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lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i want to hold you when you cry
i want to hold you when you smile
i want to sing with you when you sing
i want everyone
you are everyone
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • drinking myself to broken
    givin this guitar away
    up all night again
    its been years since i felt this way

    looking for the voters
    dont even know how to ask
    all the campaigns are over now
    and here i am at last

    walking home from vast heaven
    a stop to lighten the soul
    when sorrounded by these angels
    i wonder why i go

    yes or no
    i need votes
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    lovin kind wrote:
    drinking myself to broken
    givin this guitar away
    up all night again
    its been years since i felt this way

    looking for the voters
    dont even know how to ask
    all the campaigns are over now
    and here i am at last

    walking home from vast heaven
    a stop to lighten the soul
    when sorrounded by these angels
    i wonder why i go

    yes or no
    i need votes


    i like this
  • this poem is not who i am as much as its a poem free from soul

    its a piece of crap
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    what i like is the references below, comparing to a politician lost without his people.
    lovin kind wrote:
    looking for the voters
    dont even know how to ask
    all the campaigns are over now
    and here i am at last

    lovin kind wrote:
    yes or no
    i need votes
  • lovin kind wrote:
    this poem is not who i am as much as its a poem free from soul

    its a piece of crap

    its no piece of crap...unless of course the crap has been through filtering systems and turned into fresh, pure, beautiful, delicious, water. And that's what it is. It's a good thing.
    7/10/06
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