last goodbye poems

lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i cant stop myself from deserving more its just my nature ?
i think of oneday waking up to have so much more
but i see him smile and i feel your laughter
and i love him more than a joke

her nature is smokin she gets to singing
and sooner or later im gonna love her
and sooner or later theres a joke to be told
and it makes me sad that all of this could be stopped
but i understand that theres nothing you can do for some
it keeps you alive not to stop them from torchering me
and you hold on to four years like i should never escape from hell

is this poem probably not

but it is a last goodbye
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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Comments

  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    How sad...I wish no torture for you and am glad his smile makes you happy.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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