poem

lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
who likes to run around and mess with peoples cars
who likes to lean on love and blame it on the stars
who likes to find therye way into a poem
who likes to look themselves in the mirror
and say im theryes


get a life

drop leash get out of my fucking face
thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    who likes to read lovin kind's poetry?



    ME
  • i think this computer poetry thing allows people such as myself a way to vent maybe when if you read the things ive written you could maybe smile a bit at the angst or lack of creativity

    without the freedom to write such things i think weed always feel light years away from our favorite stars

    this kind of gives us a chance to be a star even though i know im just a normal everyday person without a stage other than this


    where are you , where did you go, why has it been so many years
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i'm a star in the blanket covering my own fool head


    :)
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    lovin kind wrote:
    who likes to run around and mess with peoples cars
    who likes to lean on love and blame it on the stars
    who likes to find therye way into a poem
    who likes to look themselves in the mirror
    and say im theryes


    get a life

    drop leash get out of my fucking face

    yes it makes me smile,
    don't it make you smile.. :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Such vulgar language.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • interesting. It reads great backwards to.

    :)
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
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