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My Anger

lucialucia Posts: 19
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I am angered
by how you know
me
inside and out
yet do not understand
a word I say

I am angered
by your love
and determination
to hold on
to me
when you must let go

But what angers me the most
is that you allowed me
to be free
of myself
for a short while
and fall into you.



(Does that make any sense to anyone?lol)
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Makes perfect sense Lucia:)
    I understand completely:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    it makes a lot of sense
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • decides2dreamdecides2dream Posts: 14,977
    damn, that is perfection.
    only change for me would be.....it's been a long while. ;)
    i really appreciate your wording, well done.
    i especially enjoy the contrast/irony of "to be free of myself.......fall into you."
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Dang that was good! Makes perfect sense. I'm going to share it with a friend of mine who has expressed some of these feelings in relation to a failed relationship--she'll love it! Thanks! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • lucialucia Posts: 19
    Thanks guys. It reasuring to know that Im not completely crazy.lol. Sometimes I guess its the irony in life that makes it interesting!
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    It's like those words are my feelings
    So it really does make sense to me
    Like it a lot:)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    Childrens Hour wrote:
    It's like those words are my feelings
    So it really does make sense to me
    Like it a lot:)

    ditto
    (well parts are my feelings and parts (on the other hand) i feel like ARE me,
    if that makes any sense).
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    lucia,

    is that your real name?

    lucia or lucinda...either one of those were supposed to be my name when i was born, according to my grandmother. my mom had other ideas though.
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • lucialucia Posts: 19
    No, my real is name is. . . . . . . . . (ooo the suspense!) Anna. lol. when i was born though, my mum wanted to call me lucia, but my dad wasnt too keen. So close friends and my mum call me lucia. somewhat random.lol
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    lucia wrote:
    No, my real is name is. . . . . . . . . (ooo the suspense!) Anna. lol. when i was born though, my mum wanted to call me lucia, but my dad wasnt too keen. So close friends and my mum call me lucia. somewhat random.lol


    and i got "tina"...
    not too far off from "anna"
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
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