Today

lucia

Today. .
I will scream the agony of needs burnt
I will sing the song I have yet to learn
I will release the fury of suppressed wants encaged
I will not damn the love like a river raged
I will show the logic spat from my mind is a lie
I will let you see the longing in my heart cry
But being me I cant,
the timings wrong
Being me I wont,
the overall pictures undesireable
Being me I know,
I should not even feel this way
So I shall hold my silence,
for one more day.

Righteous Jammer

Love the ending of your poem. Welcome to the board!

lucia

lol, why thank you, its v.nice to be here. Seems like an awesome site!! Good place to hear some undiscriminate crit, and feedback, and read some amazing poetry. Some of them on here-take my breath away.

Being Enlightened

I liked this outporing of your internal struggle. I've felt like this on occasion.