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our love

lucialucia Posts: 19
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There is no freedom within
without your truth burning out my heart.
My eyes dont see as well now
without your ego blinding them
Numbness talks to me again
without your stifling burn underneath my skin
It
what is
It
named?
freedoms in a locked room
with you and
your underestimated and impatient
grip around my wrist pulling
me unoticed
apart from the inside out
until all thats left is love.
Mine and yours.
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Comments

  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    Nice. I especially like 'freedoms in a locked room'. Keep creating, friend.
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
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