love letters

alicefellalicefell Posts: 30
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
and i want to write love letters.

(exquisitely sensual words on sheets of thin pink paper that smell deeply of sandalwood..)

but i edit myself too much. don’t you find? i do. i edit. i’m editing right now. delete, think, look up.

(i can feel you.)

shouldn’t love just flow? shouldn’t the words of love just flow?

(i can taste you.)

love. it is the purpose of life.

it is now.

it is everything.

and what i really want is to write love letters to you.



(oh god.)


but i can’t even think about that. thoughts are loud. so, i even edit my thoughts of love.

for you.

fine. here’s what i have. all i have.



(all that i have.)



here is my love letter.

to you.



“you make me want to stop editing myself.”
there is no other way.
and there never was.
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I love this one!! It bounces along with a great rhythm. :)

    (And it's romantic.)
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