Interesting Movement (explicit)

movingfingermovingfinger Posts: 117
Interesting Movement

Dinner at five
Evolved with
Cunt
Only she understands
Not now, dinner
Six dishes
Turn sun, glare
Run to
Undulating twitch
Cunt
Turn sun, glare
Iota’s gained
Only she understands
Not now, dinner
Iota’s gained
Six dishes
Moments collapse
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The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
Moves on: nor all your Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all your Tears wash out a Word of it

-- Omar Khayyam
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  • movingfingermovingfinger Posts: 117
    curious as to if anyone can get a meaning out of this one, hint, it isnt as complicated as it may seem.
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    The Moving Finger writes; and, having writ,
    Moves on: nor all your Piety nor Wit
    Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
    Nor all your Tears wash out a Word of it

    -- Omar Khayyam
  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    Deconstructionism?
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Yea...basically...she's not giving you what "YOU WANT" and being really difficult about it.......?

    Really nice writing and form too.I wish my stuff could be as short and to the point.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    I;m with Ali that the basic idea seems to be conveyed through the repeated lines, but after a few minutes thought I do find myself incapable of breaking down the meaning line for line. The repeated "six dishes" is throwing me off, as I at first thought the 'six' to be part of a timeline; it's reappearance makes me think this is not so. The repetition of 'dishes' throws me also. Why don't you enlighten me here? I'm curious.
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