Skin and Bones

SquidgeSquidge Posts: 145
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Left in front of right,
She's half an hour late
She's taking down her wall
To meet you
Looking left and right
It's all across her face
Theres nothing she can do
About it

She's struggling tonight
She's struggling tonight

Her eyes are ruby stones
Sunk into her face
Shes knows that it was true.
What they said
"She's only skin and bones,
Oh it's such a waste"
Her pretty clear tube
She turns red

She's struggling tonight
She's struggling tonight

Answers on her own, words from everyone
You'll find her alone, beneath you
She's only skin and bones, she's only having fun
Taking down her wall, taking down her wall

She's struggling tonight
She's struggling tonight
She's struggling tonight
She's struggling tonight


~~It's a song i wrote in open G (same tuning as PJ's Daughter), about a girl trying to give up smacK, HAH, she'll never do it~~~
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Comments

  • Spook FishSpook Fish Posts: 241
    thats cool squidge, keep em coming bro!!

    did you know her?
    Dont take drugs and be a loser
    wear a pink shirt and go down the boozer
  • That was sad, Squidge but I enjoyed reading it :)--shame 'bout dat girl! (even if it's not about anyone in particular, there's plenty out there in the same boat) :(
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • NothingbetterNothingbetter Wichita, KS Posts: 570
    Another great flow from a poster...you can feel that it would make a great song. I like it...
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  • SquidgeSquidge Posts: 145
    cheers guys, much appreciated. I'll try and get the song recorded and online!
  • Yet you give up on her...
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