Droevigs Prose and scribbles

Droevig

well I figure this is smarter than just creating a new thread everytime, so critique away I love suggestions.



Listen LISTEN!

Falling leaves, and empty branches.
Singing singing to the fall.
White Blankets Hover in the sky,
The sound of snow is deafening.

Listen LISTEN!

How the silence creeps,
into your soul, into your heart.
Muffled is the lonlieness,
Blankets blankets everywhere.

Droevig

Edited version of prose from an earlier post

remebered it yesterday
The day we first met, that first touch
That first bone warming everything,
When you opened my soul.

You found me in the corner,
Huddled Low Upon my Knees,
Eyes Closed, body Locked and Mind Bursting I sat,
Motionless and silent in the gloom

You held me in that corner,
Crawled between the white washed walls
To touch the barness of my back
You warmed my nakedness with your eyes,
And Clothed me in your arms

You carried me in the Corner,
Pulled me down against your chest
And knocked all my fears down on the floor.

We made Love outside that corner,
Outside under a blanket of white rubies
Bursting in the Dark.

I stroked your face and told you a secret,
Yours to keep or yours to share,
I told you the truth when I said
I love you.