No Longer

imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
I walked you through the maze of my soul
with hope and smiles
Just for you to reverse and knock down all my walls

Why do I walk your winding trails
Just for you to let go of my hand and lose me

I give you all that I am with light and truth
Just for you to lock me in the dark with your lies

Compassion and sincerity is my gift to you
You unwrap it without value

Your selfishness dismisses my purity
My tenderness is whipped by your tongue

I've opened my doors and shared my dreams
I've given you comfort when you needed encouragement
I was a source of strength when you needed support

No longer will I
Jump into your life with both feet
I promise to be true to myself
and not let you watch me bleed
If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
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  • pinktipspinktips Posts: 40
    iznt it abut givn w/out expiktatons ?

    u dont evr get bak.
  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    imspinnin wrote:
    I walked you through the maze of my soul
    with hope and smiles
    Just for you to reverse and knock down all my walls

    Why do I walk your winding trails
    Just for you to let go of my hand and lose me

    I give you all that I am with light and truth
    Just for you to lock me in the dark with your lies

    Compassion and sincerity is my gift to you
    You unwrap it without value

    Your selfishness dismisses my purity
    My tenderness is whipped by your tongue

    I've opened my doors and shared my dreams
    I've given you comfort when you needed encouragement
    I was a source of strength when you needed support

    No longer will I
    Jump into your life with both feet
    I promise to be true to myself
    and not let you watch me bleed


    wow
    great piece...good job
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    pinktips wrote:
    iznt it abut givn w/out expiktatons ?

    u dont evr get bak.
    Exactly...you just get tired of giving your all to never get one ounce of respect back.
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    wow
    great piece...good job
    thank you...:o
    I haven't written in years,
    I used to write alot in when in college...tons of inspiration then,
    but I guess lost my drive along the way.

    -guess I'm back in the saddle:)
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • CenterCityCenterCity Posts: 193
    i agree with pinktips and depopulation...it just feels that way to be depleted of resources because you don't get back...object is to be resourceful
    I need to finish writing.
  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    InspirAshion:
    by Bob Dylan

    Buckets of rain
    Buckets of tears
    Got all them buckets coming out of my ears
    Buckets of moonbeams in my hand
    You got all the love honey baby
    I can stand.

    I been meek
    And hard like and oak
    I seen pretty people disappear like smoke
    Friends will arrive friends will disappear
    If you want me honey baby
    I'll be there.

    I like your smile
    And your fingertips
    I like the way that you move your lips
    I like the cool way you look at me
    Everything about you is bringing me
    Misery.

    Little red wagon
    Little red bike
    I ain't no monkey, but I know what I like
    I like the way you love me strong and slow
    I'm taking you with me honey baby
    When I go.

    Life is sad
    Life is a bust
    All ya can do is do what you must
    You do what you must do and ya do it well
    I'll do it for you honey baby
    Can't you tell ?
  • imspinninimspinnin Posts: 933
    sometimes you can give too much

    didn't cornell say/ sing

    you needed light so i set myself on fire


    something like that anyway

    i know how you feel find some one who appreciates all the effort - i know i will one day, dont settle for selfish people, get them out your life no matter what capacity they are in it
    thank you...I feel writting your feelings down on paper, then reading it back to yourself and reflecting on it, is the first step to a more powerful self.:o
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
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