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My first fathers day

SPARKY02SPARKY02 Posts: 16
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
So many things changed in this past year
the gift of life landed in our hands
my beautiful son was born
and I cried.

To see your first smile,
or the wonder in your eyes
on your first car ride
I smiled.

All the sleepless nights
I wouldnt change a thing
no matter how difficult the times
you have changed me

I love you
my dear sweet son
thank you for my gift this fathers day
thank you for being my son.
"Im gone, Im gone...
"03-28-1994, 04-11-2003, 00-00-2006.
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  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    A happy poem:)
    I like it..
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • SPARKY02SPARKY02 Posts: 16
    thanks its my first.. :)
    "Im gone, Im gone...
    "03-28-1994, 04-11-2003, 00-00-2006.
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    Happy Father's Day, Sparky02!
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • SPARKY02SPARKY02 Posts: 16
    Bibliobella wrote:
    Happy Father's Day, Sparky02!
    thanks.. same to ya
    "Im gone, Im gone...
    "03-28-1994, 04-11-2003, 00-00-2006.
  • SPARKY02SPARKY02 Posts: 16
    Thanks :) Its not a long one, but how I was feeling about tomorrow.
    "Im gone, Im gone...
    "03-28-1994, 04-11-2003, 00-00-2006.
  • Anna_falkAnna_falk Posts: 114
    Hello Sparky !

    Your poem was very cute !
    To worry about tomorrow doesn't make it easier,
    it only makes today worse.
  • SPARKY02SPARKY02 Posts: 16
    Thank You Anna... Glad You Enjoyed..:)
    "Im gone, Im gone...
    "03-28-1994, 04-11-2003, 00-00-2006.
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    congratulations....!!!!

    our baby is 1 and a half.....he's crazy about his Dad.....the main thing he says from morning till night is 'Dada, car'.....it's so wondrous to see your boy go through the different stages......and to know that your line will survive......and that he'll have children, and they'll have children......life just seems richer when you have a child......to see the different expressions pass over his face.....and he's so small....I can totally understand how this experience could inspire your first poem.....it's an amazing life changing experience, and your poem does it justice......

    (okay, now just shuttup....hehehehe)
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    SPARKY02 wrote:
    So many things changed in this past year
    the gift of life landed in our hands
    my beautiful son was born
    and I cried.

    To see your first smile,
    or the wonder in your eyes
    on your first car ride
    I smiled.

    All the sleepless nights
    I wouldnt change a thing
    no matter how difficult the times
    you have changed me

    I love you
    my dear sweet son
    thank you for my gift this fathers day
    thank you for being my son.
    Absolutely B*E*A*U*T*I*F*U*L Sparky:)
    Hope you (and all the Fathers on the board)
    Had a Happy Fathers day!!!!!!!!
    Heart,
    allison
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • SPARKY02SPARKY02 Posts: 16
    THANKS ALI AND ISN...

    it means alot.. there was alot more to the poem at 1st, but that was all I could put out, seeing as Im at work, and you never know who is looking over your shoulder.
    "Im gone, Im gone...
    "03-28-1994, 04-11-2003, 00-00-2006.
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