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velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
...well you earned it my dear!

~this is an oldie i have regurgitated because i never really liked the style of its substance... i still don't think it's of a high-enough quality for the topics at hand but it's all i've got for now and i think it's time to express...

The Hunters' Hymn

The Sphynx ignored the warning sent,
Calling outward onward She went--
Seeking always to be love therefore,
She forgot hence to lock the back door;

This Eternal Woman-Spirit-Child,
Carries eyes of mysterious mild,
Brown and Black and White and Red,
Afore the world's most precious head;

It takes a Syphon to crack Her code,
Digging the depths of Nature's abode,
Until the trenches have all been swept,
To reveal the treasures that She's kept;

Bidding then a final adieux,
Ulysses retires to begin anew--
The hunt of 'Man' in history,
For God's penultimate mystery.



~not that i'm leaving, just kind of an eternal-recurrence theme or whatever...
you like?
change begins with discontent.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    It's got that medieval feel to it, must be the influence of the dragons, seeing that you're currently located on their island. :D

    Hmmmm, Sphynx, back door, world's most precious head, crack Her code, digging the depths, reveal the treasures....uhhh, ummm, yeah, I won't go there. :p;):D

    I like. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    It's got that medieval feel to it, must be the influence of the dragons, seeing that you're currently located on their island. :D

    Hmmmm, Sphynx, back door, world's most precious head, crack Her code, digging the depths, reveal the treasures....uhhh, ummm, yeah, I won't go there. :p;):D

    I like. :)


    well Hopefully it's clear that I would Love to.
    change begins with discontent.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    velvet I site wrote:
    well Hopefully it's clear that I would Love to.

    :p:D Crystal. Hee Hee!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    :p:D Crystal. Hee Hee!


    come now, darling... diamonds are sooo much better.
    change begins with discontent.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    velvet I site wrote:
    come now, darling... diamonds are sooo much better.

    I suppose they are, once they clear the mine and are cut and refined....still, I'm not a digger...crystal sparkles and twinkles in the sunlight just the same (kinda, sorta ;) ). I know someone sang about diamonds being a girl's best friend but I feel for crystal, crystal needs a friend too!!!! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    I suppose they are, once they clear the mine and are cut and refined....still, I'm not a digger...crystal sparkles and twinkles in the sunlight just the same (kinda, sorta ;) ). I know someone sang about diamonds being a girl's best friend but I feel for crystal, crystal needs a friend too!!!! :D


    You love everyone and Everything don't'cha BE--? I can feel that bond between us.
    change begins with discontent.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    velvet I site wrote:
    You love everyone and Everything don't'cha BE--? I can feel that bond between us.

    You know what? Until everyone and everything gives me good reason not to, they got my love. :) So, to answer your question--yes. We's bonded, my friend!!! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • velvet I sitevelvet I site Posts: 192
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    You know what? Until everyone and everything gives me good reason not to, they got my love. :) So, to answer your question--yes. We's bonded, my friend!!! :D


    exactly... Respect until it's broken/betrayed... i hear you loud and clear dear.
    change begins with discontent.
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