here's one i wrote at the grocery store earlier...

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edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Spirits enticed, by rhyme and reason,
unite in grace, through time and treason,
to love as One, they arm the team,
touting a gun, to defend the stream,
combined in red, as knight and queen,
and flouting the led, to whomever is mean,

and so they spin, hands in hands,
wanting to begin, to rebuild the lands,
in loving passion, they storm the earth,
with a fitfull bastion, they spark rebirth,
that Nature sprouts, again into action,
joining in soul, vs. Georgie's evil faction,

Time thus moves, with a vital concession,
just like before, as a civil secession,
in growth of blood, change becomes real,
into a flood, of lovely zeal,
words carry on, instigating growth,
from hearts enriddled, that mystics knoweth.


it's not perfect, but kind of a departure from my usual tacts i think, so i hope that works..
change begins with discontent.
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  • this is a peice i've also recently written in the grocery store

    juice boxes
    cereal(oatmeal sqaures)
    plastic cups
    cookies
    fruit2o
    dog toy
    dog treat
    napkins
    the end
    "You, my love, are allowed to rot and to die and to live again more alive and incandescent than before"
  • this is a peice i've also recently written in the grocery store

    juice boxes
    cereal(oatmeal sqaures)
    plastic cups
    cookies
    fruit2o
    dog toy
    dog treat
    napkins
    the end


    i love that ending! not to be rude, but you didn't forget anything did ya?
    change begins with discontent.
  • blah! CHEESE
    "You, my love, are allowed to rot and to die and to live again more alive and incandescent than before"
  • blah! CHEESE

    hahahah! nicely done...
    change begins with discontent.
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