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couldn't have been more straight forward

asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
edited July 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Drop by drop and free flowing
Year by year … limbs growing
Changing shoes one by one

Packed my dreams with my gear
Had a plan pretty clear
Had enough fuel to churn

Friends, foes and family
Fucking time of sanity
Had them through the seasonal sun

Obligatory expectations
Obliging my ambitions
Tears and twinkles took their turns

Now they find me bright and young
And this is how I wanna burn
Gonna die at twenty one.
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Comments

  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    artistic ambition and very well written for my reading preference

    hope all is well
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    enjoying poetry this AM.. thank you!
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
    thanks ...... had written it couple of years ago ..... must have been a really bad day .... but i'm still alive this day .. crossed that age
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