dance

asphalt

the poems based on an experience (my only one) the previous night to a bar of dancing girls ... i was shocked ..... the skin and extravagace .....


She lowered the weight
And all the muscles continued
To stress my liberty to choose
Which name
Which shoe
Would she wear?
A floor that we all shared
Like a bedroom
All Cinderella sisters
All beautiful
My 20 girlfriends were ready
To bare

So frozen on my table
And chiseled as per her taste
I asked for a visible chance
For a surrendered bait
I drank some more
Before she tied the chains
Never before did I have
More love to spare
Never before I was tethered
With so much to claim
My heart couldn’t gather my state
From under the ripples and rays
So much of her to cross check
If I could really stake
So much of her out here
Got displayed
A ton of meat
A length of skin to wrap
Up the day

So I bought the smile she kept safe
For a brother
Bought her climaxed giggle
Over and over again
Still tied to my chair
Still husband to so many
I gambled each one of them out
Till I bought so much of her
Indebted I couldn’t inhale
The stench of her desire
As it covered up her despair

So I paid some more to let
A smile across that face
I tried to be the man across the room
Who’d admire her fate.
I tried but I might have
Just failed

justam

This seems sad to me. Am I misunderstanding it? :(

asphalt

yeah .. its kinda sad .... its more like a sattire ... ya know ... the place offers so much ..... every things disposable .... but that's the point ....... just the truth of good things becoming so disposable is kind a ironical ..

i feel i could have written better end lines ....... it's just too cliche' right now

Anna_falk

This was a great poem, thanks for sharing your experience.