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asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I see fields under concrete toes / I see concrete holding lives // beyond the panes of my timid window / the skies have already been occupied // I look around for a door to escape / between 2 walls is a wall I find //

there are people I see everyday /

it's been days since they have smiled //


i am looking for one last word of this incomplete poem .. but looks ok for now ....
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  • mayfieldmayfield Posts: 20
    asphalt wrote:
    I see fields under concrete toes / I see concrete holding lives // beyond the panes of my timid window / the skies have already been occupied // I look around for a door to escape / between 2 walls is a wall I find //

    there are people I see everyday /

    it's been days since they have smiled //


    i am looking for one last word of this incomplete poem .. but looks ok for now ....

    Yeah i like it alot!
    "...I'm white on the outside..."
    "...We're all different behind the eyes..."
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    tarmac? tarmacadam?
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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