disturbed sleep
asphalt
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usualy wouldn't have written it ... not the best of the stuff ... but was quite disturbed since morning .. so just penned something .... here's it
Never been ached like this
To the bones
On my own bed
Alone
Surprised at the scene
Of my dreams
You were fucking him
And were pleased
The sweet intentions
Of a gymnast coiled
In a bent emotion
Never made me more weak
For the supple lips
Kissed another meat
Never the blood complained
For the morning so unruly received
That cruel picture
That clearly revealed
Hours of assumptions
And patience
At a flip side demeaned
A jealous confrontation
With friends
I couldn’t heal
She summed up all the bonds
Jumbled up beliefs
A looser found engaged
With himself
A single moment of tolerance
Left scarred interests
A burning helplessness
Encountered in sleep
You were fucking him
And were pleased
Never been ached like this
To the bones
On my own bed
Alone
Surprised at the scene
Of my dreams
You were fucking him
And were pleased
The sweet intentions
Of a gymnast coiled
In a bent emotion
Never made me more weak
For the supple lips
Kissed another meat
Never the blood complained
For the morning so unruly received
That cruel picture
That clearly revealed
Hours of assumptions
And patience
At a flip side demeaned
A jealous confrontation
With friends
I couldn’t heal
She summed up all the bonds
Jumbled up beliefs
A looser found engaged
With himself
A single moment of tolerance
Left scarred interests
A burning helplessness
Encountered in sleep
You were fucking him
And were pleased
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it only makes today worse.
man... that line is really really good
I've read that dreams about a lover cheating signifies self esteem issues. Certainly brought on by perhaps unspoken signals from the cheater... best bet to have it out and see whassup, honest and all that. My 2 cents. Please forgive my audacity.... shutting up, now
need to get over things ..
fck
I totally know
catharsis via poetry. venting to page and to a group of people that show promise in caring... at least enough to help you through the day. I personally did it for a long time, and still do here and there.
There are some interesting visions in your work, and some excellent "potential", if I may say so.
good luck to you
thankaa everybody
Thanks for sharing