i pray that god could wink

asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When u need more time
Your nights should shrink
When u need to be over love
You must learn to blink
When schedules get delayed
And wardrobes left empty
Rooms unwashed with platform dust
When goodbye begins a journey
If peter knew at 7
What he should have learnt as a kid
He could have at least cried
When he was asked not to weep
He understands too much
And that’s his fault
Afternoons could make him clumsy
If he could have been a street dog
Now restlessness sulks for its state
As it rests besides him in sleep
Now years have made him a man
Now tears have made him weak
He thinks …
A little more freedom on earth
A little more insanity to fling
The vision divine less deliberate
I pray that god could wink

I pray that god could wink
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Comments

  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    This is very thoughtful. I'm not sure I understand it yet, but I'll reread it. :)
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    i likee de poem, asphalt. i always like your work :)
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I really enjoyed this one...good read! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
    thanks everyone ...... its a wired poem i know .....

    it means ,.... when u tend to understand too many things ...... u sometimes make it too complicated for yourself ........................

    i just wish so much .. this world was a simpler place .............
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    asphalt wrote:

    it means ,.... when u tend to understand too many things ...... u sometimes make it too complicated for yourself ........................

    i just wish so much .. this world was a simpler place .............

    This is an idea I think about sometimes too. :)
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