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asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
edited January 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It has been more beautiful an year
The seasons have been sincere
Haven’t seen a planet struggle like this before
To prevent a grave being dug by its prisoners

I saw two chimneys amongst the rising birds
Swallowing its labourers
This furnace has exhausted all fuel in its throat
Now remain there just friends
Of a revolution to be cleared

Turn the turbines, choked on the saviour
Feeding his children
If only time could reverse this gear!
Search for reasons and results amongst mirrors
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  • BuruBuru Posts: 8,473
    I have a hard time figuring out what this poem is about.
    Despite this, there's something really compelling about the verse:

    I saw two chimneys amongst the rising birds
    Swallowing its labourers
    y la banda de Guille... cuando toca?
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    It has been a beautiful year. I like this one. :)
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  • asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
    thanks for the read !

    i've tried to speak about 'sincere' seasons .. a state which speak of our times

    literally .. seasons speaking about the planel earth .. about its residents (prisoners) and their struggle ... and tryting to prevent them from doing certain things like polluting etc. ...


    unfortunately in today's world things are related to each other like reflections of cause and effect ... one thing leads to other .. and there are no clear solutions ..

    that's what the last line about .....
  • asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
    P.S. the beauty of the year .. justam ... lies in its honesty! ...finally times speak the truth!
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