3 A.M. alarm

asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Prelude …

A blissful morning makes me smile
When she still divorces my desire
Withdrawn from struggle, scared of motive
A numb potential proves futile ...



I walk the corridors
From beyond the heavy doors
Of a breathing past
With promises loyal only
In a god’s world
Echoing in a hollow vacated heart
A shear chance of memory
Reminding me of sins I’ve done
My revolver loads up
Against a notion
In a decaying head that succumbs
I think it’s supernatural
Tell me … its love.
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    And I'm sure she'd say it was love
    because you're so lovable
    sit down and breathe deep
    love comes in waves
    and true love is quiet sometimes
    but I'm sure she'd say it was love
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
  • asphaltasphalt Posts: 113
    thanks justam ........... !

    i'm kinda sure myself ........ but poetry's more than just being sure
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