First Time

*GVN2FLY**GVN2FLY* Posts: 6
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Hey all,

I'm a regular on the Porch but this is my first time posting in here........I look forward to sharing and discussing a whole bunch with anyone who is interested......
Anyways, just thought I would share something....mothers will probably like it best.....I wrote it for my gf at the time (ex now)
Gives me a little therapy to share it.......
thanks,
Todd

BEAUTIFUL MOTHER


B orn an Angel in her arms
E ver waiting, a mother warms
A new life, looking closer
U nder stars watching over
T o hear so much from a tiny voice
I n providing freedoms & every choice
F rozen moments which become years
U sing shoulders, absorbing tears
L oving gently, dissolving fears

M ore than ever known, a mother gives
O f endless love, for a child she lives
T he hand that feeds, the voice that calms
H er fingers clutching tiny palms
E ternity gifted to another
R ighteous heart, Beautiful mother
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Comments

  • That was very heart warming and sweet, *GVN2FLY*. :) Thanks for sharing! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • JobbeJobbe Posts: 20
    Excellent work! Rhythm and rhyme up-tight, words full of emotion and united they draw a beautiful picture of a beautiful mother! Thumbs-up ;)
  • lovin kindlovin kind Posts: 268
    this poetry place has some of the best poetry ever and some of the worst as well

    and the worst would be me on a mean day


    your poem rocks
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • Thanks for the kind words everyone
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    E ternity gifted to another

    there is no way to express how beautiful the gift of being a mother is....tiny fingers, tiny toes, spread love, baby grows......

    I caught my ex looking at me yesterday, as my baby and I exchanged one of those wordless stares we have when he's falling asleep.....only this time he was in a hospital bed after an operation, and I just wonder what my ex was thinking.....was he surprised by the amount of love I have for our son, or was he feeling the haunting emotions of PearljamminJason from another thread.....I kind of hope he sees the special love Torin and I share.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
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