Sorry

i_am_a_wishlisti_am_a_wishlist Posts: 628
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
This is a song I'm writing about a lovely lady whom I met thanks to this forum. I have falled head over heals for her. Unfortunely she lives a long way away and I haven't met in person :(. She was the first to read this. She understood my feelings and liked the song. I'm not sure if she feels the same way. But hopefully one day something might happen. Anyway I hope you like it too


~*~*~*Sorry*~*~*~

I've finally found you but
The ocean keeps us apart
Why are the best things always beyond my reach?
It shouldn't be like this but I'm afaid it is...


I'm sorry I can't be there with you
I'm sorry I can't hold you in my arms
I'm sorry I can't look into your eyes
I'm sorry I can't feel your tender lips
Cause you're so far away...


The days and weeks go by
I havn't seen or touched your face
But you've touched my heart
The pain it's driving me mad...


I'm sorry I can't be there with you
I'm sorry I can't hold you in my arms
I'm sorry I can't look into your eyes
I'm sorry I can't feel your tender lips
Cause you're so far away...


So do you feel what I feel?
I hope you do
So someday we can be together


Tell me is this just some crazy dream,
Or can I have the chance
To make you happy
To make you laugh
To make you smile
To make you dance
To make you love...

Just give me the chance
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  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    This is a song I'm writing about a lovely lady whom I met thanks to this forum. I have falled head over heals for her. Unfortunely she lives a long way away and I haven't met in person :(. She was the first to read this. She understood my feelings and liked the song. I'm not sure if she feels the same way. But hopefully one day something might happen. Anyway I hope you like it too


    ~*~*~*Sorry*~*~*~

    I've finally found you but
    The ocean keeps us apart
    Why are the best things always beyond my reach?
    It shouldn't be like this but I'm afaid it is...


    I'm sorry I can't be there with you
    I'm sorry I can't hold you in my arms
    I'm sorry I can't look into your eyes
    I'm sorry I can't feel your tender lips
    Cause you're so far away...


    The days and weeks go by
    I havn't seen or touched your face
    But you've touched my heart
    The pain it's driving me mad...


    I'm sorry I can't be there with you
    I'm sorry I can't hold you in my arms
    I'm sorry I can't look into your eyes
    I'm sorry I can't feel your tender lips
    Cause you're so far away...


    So do you feel what I feel?
    I hope you do
    So someday we can be together


    Tell me is this just some crazy dream,
    Or can I have the chance
    To make you happy
    To make you laugh
    To make you smile
    To make you dance
    To make you love...

    Just give me the chance

    That just gave me the shivers n chills... superb! I love, love, love it ;-)
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • That just gave me the shivers n chills... superb! I love, love, love it ;-)

    Thank you.
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