10 Times

mohomoho Posts: 541
----Here's a song i wrote so people, honest opinions

Times trapped behind bars ….. Caught cannot hide
Reach for the stars ….. Fuck it stay inside
Deep beneath the sea …. They can’t catch ya here
Its pointless anyhow …… But it still brings the fear

10 times what they can’t find
10 times and now its fine
10 times what they can’t find
your lost, so don’t come back

Long for a rest …… just had it so give in
It’s a clock won’t stop ….. midnight, new day soon
I don’t wana fight …… just rest in my room
Its all tax at best …… I’ll end up growing thin

10 times what they can’t find
10 times and now its fine
10 times what they can’t find
your lost, so don’t come back
JUST PLAY THE F***ING NOTE!!!
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Comments

  • I like it. It actually almost comes across better as lyrics, than as a poem...but that's neither here nor there.

    I'm all too familiar with this line from your poem:

    I don’t wana fight …… just rest in my room
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