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A lil' something...

JobbeJobbe Posts: 20
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Creating colours, making sounds
Turning pages, turn around
Cast aside, embrace it all
Flip the coin, just leave the call
Twist your eyes, just twist their minds
Twist and turn to their demise
Crash and crumble into pieces
Crack 'em open, just like Jesus
Stuff 'em full of precious lies
Lies that will jazz up their lives

Just a lil' something :)
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  • JobbeJobbe Posts: 20
    Once again, the sun will fade
    In envy it will hide and wither
    Once again, the waves will break
    And crash the coasts instead of slither
    Once again, I hold my breath
    As time has paused its endless course
    Once again, my eyes will rest
    In divine tranquility assured
    Once again, I start forgetting
    All my troubles, all my searches
    Once again, a change of setting
    Shades withdraw and light emerges
    Once again, this very while
    I indulge in sacred bliss
    Once again, my heart will thrive
    Once again, you smile

    I sent this poem to a girl I'd only seen shortly and never talked to...
    A bit old-fashioned but what the heck :)
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Jobbe wrote:
    Creating colours, making sounds
    Turning pages, turn around
    Cast aside, embrace it all
    Flip the coin, just leave the call
    Twist your eyes, just twist their minds
    Twist and turn to their demise
    Crash and crumble into pieces
    Crack 'em open, just like Jesus
    Stuff 'em full of precious lies
    Lies that will jazz up their lives

    Just a lil' something :)

    excellent rhythm and rhyme here....very fun to read....
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