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To Need....

krystaljennakrystaljenna Posts: 13
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i WANT SEE BUT i HAVE ALREADY SEEN....
i WANT TO HEAR BUT i HAVE ALREADY HEARD....
i WANT TO GO YET i'VE ALREADY BEEN....

....WHAT i AM, WHAT i'VE BECOME....
JUST WASTING AWAY INSIDE,
BECAUSE GOD IS NOT ON my SIDE.

i SAW AND i DON'T WANT TO SEE....
i HEARD AND i DON'T WANT TO HEAR....
i WENT AND i DON'T WANT TO GO....

....BUT IT'S WHO i AM, IT'S WHAT i'VE BECOME, i'VE GOT MAKE IT THERE SLOW.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
i sUGGEST yOU sTEP oUT oN yOUR pORCH......rUN aWAY mY sON (aND dAUGHTER) sEE iT aLL, gO sEE tHE wORLD.
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  • bossman3188bossman3188 Posts: 263
    I am not sure if i am correct on this but im gonna take a stab at it. i noticed all the words that speak of you are in smaller case letters I.E. i & i've. maybe this means you feel small in the world? people look past you capabilities or reasons?

    i think it is a great poem.
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
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