Paradise
krystaljenna
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Take all your worldly goods and leave them at the door
They're all worthless here
All the tears they shed - I don't know what it's for
You'll find paradise here
Close your sad eyes and take one last breath
There's no pain here
The hurt you felt and the adversaries you met
Don't reside here
It has all gone, the sorrow and anguish - your life has just begun.
They're all worthless here
All the tears they shed - I don't know what it's for
You'll find paradise here
Close your sad eyes and take one last breath
There's no pain here
The hurt you felt and the adversaries you met
Don't reside here
It has all gone, the sorrow and anguish - your life has just begun.
i sUGGEST yOU sTEP oUT oN yOUR pORCH......rUN aWAY mY sON (aND dAUGHTER) sEE iT aLL, gO sEE tHE wORLD.
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YES!!!! Damn, that's great!! I liked the feel of the whole poem but the first lines there just jumped right out and grabbed me. Reminds me of Imagine, "Imagine no possessions, I wonder if you can..." something like that. Hmmm, imagine, NO possessions!!!! I wonder, would it be "just like starting over" ? Thanks, krystaljenna.