A few songs
dark_crystalis
Posts: 23
Well these are lyrics for my band, please give us some critisism. We haven't found our own feel yet, we play several styles ranging from grungy sounds to more metal sounding stuff.
Untitled:
The world is a hole
Oh no I’m not whole
I tried hard but I failed; like everything else
I cut my shoulder for the last time
Bled so much that I couldn’t even feel
I heal only to bring myself down
I’m never alone but I’m alone in my mind
She’s scared of her own shadow
Oh my god we’re so shallow
Everything is finally crumbling
What you hold dear is always what you lose
I’ll move away from here
Leaving you with no heir
Not who you think I am
I tried hard to be a son but I became a stranger
Get rid of me during your epiphany
I’m sure someday you’ll have a beautiful life
The day it stops raining
The day I leave this purgatory
This one doesn't have a official name yet but I was maybe thinking something like Waves:
I want to breath through you
Want to be in love with you
Want to bleed with you
Want to bleed you through
Want to end our pains
Finally understand
Been long since my salvation
Lost it all on the edge of madness
All the lights are off
Painted in black
I lack self-control
Since the day I fell apart
Never felt like I had a heart
Eternal coil or unbearable muddle
Follow the waves
To the edge of this
Always be a mystery
Already drowning under the waves
Don’t hold your breath
Follow the current
Melancholy leads to butchery
Honestly in pugatory
What to say
Sorry
Serenade of Sins:
Over the clouds, the sun’s shining
Why can’t we see its rays?
Leaves are rustling in the wind
Serenade of sins
Black, grey, white then blue
No birds are flying in the sky
Black sky – Its pouring rain
Complete freedom to cleanse the soul
Serenade of sins
Stading here in the rain
Alone in my head
I guess this should be the end
Clouds are finally dissipating
Sun’s shining, then why the fuck can’t it reach us?
Why are we in the dark?
Why are we stuck here to rot?
The things we did – Things we said
Serenade of decadence
Untitled:
The world is a hole
Oh no I’m not whole
I tried hard but I failed; like everything else
I cut my shoulder for the last time
Bled so much that I couldn’t even feel
I heal only to bring myself down
I’m never alone but I’m alone in my mind
She’s scared of her own shadow
Oh my god we’re so shallow
Everything is finally crumbling
What you hold dear is always what you lose
I’ll move away from here
Leaving you with no heir
Not who you think I am
I tried hard to be a son but I became a stranger
Get rid of me during your epiphany
I’m sure someday you’ll have a beautiful life
The day it stops raining
The day I leave this purgatory
This one doesn't have a official name yet but I was maybe thinking something like Waves:
I want to breath through you
Want to be in love with you
Want to bleed with you
Want to bleed you through
Want to end our pains
Finally understand
Been long since my salvation
Lost it all on the edge of madness
All the lights are off
Painted in black
I lack self-control
Since the day I fell apart
Never felt like I had a heart
Eternal coil or unbearable muddle
Follow the waves
To the edge of this
Always be a mystery
Already drowning under the waves
Don’t hold your breath
Follow the current
Melancholy leads to butchery
Honestly in pugatory
What to say
Sorry
Serenade of Sins:
Over the clouds, the sun’s shining
Why can’t we see its rays?
Leaves are rustling in the wind
Serenade of sins
Black, grey, white then blue
No birds are flying in the sky
Black sky – Its pouring rain
Complete freedom to cleanse the soul
Serenade of sins
Stading here in the rain
Alone in my head
I guess this should be the end
Clouds are finally dissipating
Sun’s shining, then why the fuck can’t it reach us?
Why are we in the dark?
Why are we stuck here to rot?
The things we did – Things we said
Serenade of decadence
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