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To Paradise

NastNast Posts: 127
edited May 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Does thou wish to travel to paradise…
Carried upon the back of a giant creature across an inlet to an inconceivable isle,
A tiring ride,
That shall last all hours of darkness…
The beast will make no resonance;
will not tire…
The wake…
beautiful…

?

She blushes...
The king of run on sentences...
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  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Does thou wish to travel to paradise,
    Buying the wake upon your feet, upon your belly, upon your chest, upon your face,
    Upon your tongue,
    Could you be fulfilled…
    By salts of the air,
    and of the sea,
    Upon arrival,
    the first stop…

    ?

    She blushes.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Does thou wish to inherit paradise,
    From the swell that leads to the breath that chases and the shore that fades,
    Into oblivion,
    Affording the heavy toll...
    Of love-lust and heart-fetter...
    Will you deeply...
    Sweetly...
    Succumb…

    ?

    She blushes.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Innuendo is always fun! =)

    -Nasty
    The king of run on sentences...
  • dark_crystalisdark_crystalis Posts: 23
    How about putting that in 1 post?
    Quadruple post, never saw that before...
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Does thou wish to travel to paradise…
    Carried upon the back of a giant creature across an inlet to an inconceivable isle,
    A tiring ride,
    That shall last all hours of darkness…
    The beast will make no resonance;
    will not tire…
    The wake…
    beautiful…

    ?

    She blushes...

    Does thou wish to travel to paradise,
    Buying the wake upon your feet, upon your belly, upon your chest, upon your face,
    Upon your tongue,
    Could you be fulfilled…
    By salts of the air,
    and of the sea,
    Upon arrival,
    the first stop…

    ?

    She blushes.

    Does thou wish to inherit paradise,
    From the swell that leads to the breath that chases and the shore that fades,
    Into oblivion,
    Affording the heavy toll...
    Of love-lust and heart-fetter...
    Will you deeply...
    Sweetly...
    Succumb…

    ?

    She blushes.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    much more effective in just one post....it looks very nice that way....
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  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Yes, I apologize for that, I was writing it as I posted it.

    One of those types of things! =)

    -Nast
    The king of run on sentences...
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    it is very nice.....
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  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Ya I think it turned out pretty good for the time I wrote it in... =) thanks for the compliment!

    -Nast
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    VERY NICE NAST...BUT SHES NOT BLUSHING....YET!(me)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Do you really want to tempt me to?

    =)

    -Nast
    The king of run on sentences...
  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    Ali! Still flirting...

    I know I'm not around much anymore, but still, I am jealous...
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Nast wrote:
    Do you really want to tempt me to?

    =)

    -Nast
    Yes!!!!!!!!!

    And grooveamatic....been missing you darling......

    Actually....I'm one to blush quite easily;)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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