A Sigh;

NastNast Posts: 127
edited April 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Ere the battle within
promised many things,
the conflict isn't whether,
isn't a matter of doing right.
It's how far does go,
and upon arrival,
to the awry place,
does one stop?

With the destination established,
to know without fretfulness,
still does not measure.

-D
The king of run on sentences...
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  • NastNast Posts: 127
    Anybody else sigh once and a while?

    This is more how it was more meant to be read...

    Ere the battle within
    promised many things,
    the conflict isn't whether,
    isn't a matter of doing right.
    It's how far does go,
    and upon arrival,
    to the awry place,
    does one stop?

    With the destination established,
    to know without fretfulness,
    still




    does




    not




    measure.
    The king of run on sentences...
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I sigh all the time...reading this piece makes me sigh in contemplative thought.I like it.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    I wrote to someone that it's about knowing where actions lead, not caring, but when you get to where you are going, will you be satisfied, or will you just want more?

    Then concluded that it doesn't matter, all that matters is that you are having fun maing good use of your time.

    -Nasty
    The king of run on sentences...
  • NastNast Posts: 127
    So don't think too hard! =)
    The king of run on sentences...
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