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My Present Future

Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
edited February 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Sometimes.
The world wouldn't turn for me.

Someday.
The future I still believe.

Somehow.
You still live inside of my head.

I hope now.
I go and I leave my 'friends'.


Oh and I wish it, on its way, yeah.
I take it, for a trip, yeah.
I'm leaving here and I'm not coming back, the past was a freak, And I've lost its track..

I'm flying
I'm flying
I'm flying
I'm flying

I'm flying my wings of an angel,
I'm touching my untouchable dream..
I'm living out my existance,
I'm happily flowing downstream..


What do you think?
no matter where you go,
there you are.

- brain of c
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  • Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
    Nothing at all?
    no matter where you go,
    there you are.

    - brain of c
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I like it Boom the Cat! I think it is a great read. I like the feeling of turning away from bad and pursuing good kind of thing I got from it. Is this a song? It reads like a song. :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
    Yeah kinda, I havent made it to music, and I dont intend to, but I kinda make my poems sound like songs, it just feels better.
    no matter where you go,
    there you are.

    - brain of c
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Very cool! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • eleonoraeleonora Posts: 3,198
    Boom The Cat wrote:
    Sometimes.
    The world wouldn't turn for me.

    Someday.
    The future I still believe.

    Somehow.
    You still live inside of my head.

    I hope now.
    I go and I leave my 'friends'.


    Oh and I wish it, on its way, yeah.
    I take it, for a trip, yeah.
    I'm leaving here and I'm not coming back, the past was a freak, And I've lost its track..

    I'm flying
    I'm flying
    I'm flying
    I'm flying

    I'm flying my wings of an angel,
    I'm touching my untouchable dream..
    I'm living out my existance,
    I'm happily flowing downstream..


    What do you think?
    I really like it...Sometimes you feel like you need to disappear and explore new things.... Sometimes you feel alone being with people.
    I feel that way sometimes. Thanks for sharing your poem, beautiful
    " You, you are so special
    You have the talent to
    Make me feel like dirt
    And you, you use your
    Talent to dig me under
    And cover me with dirt.."
  • LinaMarquezLinaMarquez Posts: 18
    i like it. the simplicity works.
    http://www.linamusic.com
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