Impossible Is Nothing

Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Flying pig?
Hairless wig?
So small its big?

Done.

Solid Air?
Commonly rare?
A closed eye stare?

Easy.

Warmingly cold?
Worthless gold?
Too young and too old?

Impossible is nothing.


What do ya think of my first poem? (weird poetry is gonna be my style)
no matter where you go,
there you are.

- brain of c
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  • Any opinions?
    no matter where you go,
    there you are.

    - brain of c
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Interesting. But for some reason by the rest of the style the poem took on the last line seems like it should possibly have been "Impossible is everything"?

    meh just a thought?
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Any opinions?
    you're a fucking poet
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    Any opinions?

    I like the commonly rare line the best. oh and I wouldn't just stick to the weird poetry if I were you, write about whatever takes your interest, weird or not. hope to see more.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    pacifier wrote:
    I like the commonly rare line the best. oh and I wouldn't just stick to the weird poetry if I were you, write about whatever takes your interest, weird or not. hope to see more.

    I agree with Pacifier. I personally like weird poetry. Good to have you on board!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Nice to know you like, they'll be more to come, just not now, I'm boiling hot, and I've just had to sit in the rain outside to cool down.
    no matter where you go,
    there you are.

    - brain of c
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