Starry Grass..

Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Damp lights,
an example of a cosy life,
aren't you so safe?

Can you beleive in the world,
they try to call by a radio?
reflection of what we never saw..

Oyster party,
the bass speaks from a hungry pit,
So near yet so far away?

String ball,
the world invites us,
should we trust it?

One time,
yet we all do different things,
we're more unique than we think?

Mirrorflex,
Images of what we dont want to be,
are we us?

Future Complication,
Going back to its basics,
Will it blame us?

Can you guess what its about? I'll tell you soon.
no matter where you go,
there you are.

- brain of c
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  • ok here it is:

    Verse 1: reminds me of lights on in a trailer park and the cosy people inside.

    Verse 2: reminds me of a man in a hut in the woodlands trying to pick up alien signals on his radio.

    Verse 3: this is my weird thought of a party underwater with the and something in space picking up the music on the radio

    Verse 4: earth being appealing, but you cant leave

    Verse 5: Time zones, really there is only one time, just light in different areas of the world, and we all do different things

    Verse 6: mirrorflex (flexible mirrors) that you see in fun houses, show you as verry fat or thin, and in reality people are like that, we all have different ideas of fat and thin and prettyness, and ugliness.

    Verse 7: technology so complicated, we go back to caves because were so sick of it, and will the future blame us part id from the our lady peace song that I love,

    Kinda offbeat stuff by me, what do you think?
    no matter where you go,
    there you are.

    - brain of c
  • :) It is offbeat and I never would have guessed what they were really about on my own so, thank you for the breakdown. I really like verses 6 & 7! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    That is some pretty wild stuff. Thanks! I agree with BE and like verses 6 & 7 alot. Good read.
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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