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Spaced Out And The Mellow It Leaves.

Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
All my thoughts are falling,
waking up empty,
lost for breath Im finding words.

Switch,
to another feeling,
you beleive in something.

Alone you sit in your mindless head,
clouds on the ground, stay higher,
they could freeze the empty space.

Underground darkness, lighter than life,
read the minds of the fake people,
theres more than you.

Unfed and hungry
zone out the area of another colour
theres truth in the candy.

Take a stand for your own time,
it slops as we speak,
theres a tree grown inward

I remember something,
the waste of a pointless number,
air in my mouth feel the rush.
no matter where you go,
there you are.

- brain of c
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Comments

  • Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
    Oh yeah, no special meaning to this one, just odd. opinions people! got any?
    no matter where you go,
    there you are.

    - brain of c
  • justdannojustdanno Posts: 24
    This poem realy expresses how one feels when they are lost in thier own thoughts and feelings. And how others can seem indifferent and uncaring when one is in this self loathing or maybe a better word would be introspective state of mind. Lonely feeling.
  • Boom The CatBoom The Cat Posts: 482
    Alot of my feeling I ghet sometimes is creating something out of nothing, just out of the blue (moon)
    no matter where you go,
    there you are.

    - brain of c
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