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never will become

Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
edited June 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Infected
With
Hate
Pain
As your
Love
Came closer
Towards me
As it became we

the terrible we.....
as you can see...
never will become....
sadly, happily, you will thank me









Don't understand these feelings myself..Same for these words..I'm sorry
۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    no need to be sorry. think you have something there..;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    Well thank you:)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    big mixture of feelings there, it seems.

    is your username from the old movie?
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    violet ray wrote:
    big mixture of feelings there, it seems.

    is your username from the old movie?


    Don't know..I got it out of this line;

    welcome to children's hour, where today we'll be laughing along with torture

    And I don't know where thats from..
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • LeaderOfMenLeaderOfMen Posts: 110
    Childrens Hour wrote:
    Infected
    With
    Hate
    Pain
    As your
    Love
    Came closer
    Towards me
    As it became we

    the terrible we.....
    as you can see...
    never will become....
    sadly, happily, you will thank me


    Don't understand these feelings myself..Same for these words..I'm sorry

    To me its seems like the cunfusion you get when you fall in love for the first time, when you feel the jealousy for the first time, the pain that won't go away. So you let go of something good because the feeling are just to strong to control.



    Im probably way off, but thought id share anyway.
    I will make the world a better place...with my own, two hands.
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    LeaderOfMen wrote:
    To me its seems like the cunfusion you get when you fall in love for the first time, when you feel the jealousy for the first time, the pain that won't go away. So you let go of something good because the feeling are just to strong to control.



    Im probably way off, but thought id share anyway.

    Never thought of it that way..But you could be right..
    Yeah, I guess you are..
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • violet rayviolet ray Posts: 502
    :(

    fear can be paralyzing, life altering...damning.

    if something is good, isn't it supposed to be strong? why let go?
    You ask me to enter
    But then You make me crawl
    And I can't be holding on
    To what You got
    When all You've got is hurt
    ----
    Underneath this smile lies everything
    All my hopes and anger, pride and shame
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    To me this sounded like love gone bad. One person making the other feel resentful of them for whatever reason and that person realizing that they must go. I like how you ended it with "sadly, happily, you will thank me". That's how it is, isn't it? First you're sad because the love is gone but then you become happy because it wasn't really right in the first place. You just don't realize it until the person leaves and yes, eventually you can even thank them for the wake up call! :)

    These are your feelings, your words---even if you don't fully understand them at the moment, don't feel you need to appologize for them! :) I know I enjoyed them!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    violet ray wrote:
    :(

    fear can be paralyzing, life altering...damning.

    if something is good, isn't it supposed to be strong? why let go?


    Really don't know..
    I'm still thinking......
    :)..
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    To me this sounded like love gone bad. One person making the other feel resentful of them for whatever reason and that person realizing that they must go. I like how you ended it with "sadly, happily, you will thank me". That's how it is, isn't it? First you're sad because the love is gone but then you become happy because it wasn't really right in the first place. You just don't realize it until the person leaves and yes, eventually you can even thank them for the wake up call! :)

    These are your feelings, your words---even if you don't fully understand them at the moment, don't feel you need to appologize for them! :) I know I enjoyed them!

    I'm happy you enjoyed it..And thank you for reacting like this..:)..
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Childrens Hour wrote:
    I'm happy you enjoyed it..And thank you for reacting like this..:)..

    Aw, you're welcome. Keep on writing! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    Aw, you're welcome. Keep on writing! :)

    Yeah, I certainly will:)..
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
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