who continues?

Childrens Hour
Childrens Hour Posts: 93
edited August 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
watching
and wondering
I must have did something right
the world must love me now
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just curious what way anyone else would continue this..it doesn't work for me..I just can't get it happy! :p..
won't tell you what I saw so you can put your own ideas in it..yeah, I will make it hard on you:)..Any help?
thanks..
۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
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  • Jobbe
    Jobbe Posts: 20
    but how come i feel corny then?
    got dry lips and heavy eye lids
    the clock is ticking, though
    seemingly in the right direction
    and i'm watching
    and wondering
    whose hand hovers above my head?



    next!
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Childrens Hour wrote:
    watching
    and wondering
    I must have did something right
    the world must love me now
    ........................
    ........................
    .......................
    ...
    ...




    I've given up all my possessions
    I've fed a starving child
    I've forgiven all of my enemies
    the world must love me now?
    ....................................

    or


    they've plastered my image on billboards
    they've asked me to all their parties
    they've stood in line for hours just to see me
    the world must love me now?
    ........................... :)


    (sorry, I'm so slow!!! It's hard to work and get this stuff out quick! ) :(
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Childrens Hour
    Childrens Hour Posts: 93
    you're not slow at all:)..I took longer at those first lines..:p
    thanks for reacting, like it all..:), thanks
    more to come?
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • EvilToasterElf
    EvilToasterElf Posts: 1,119
    watching
    and wondering
    I must have did something right
    the world must love me now
    but how come i feel corny then?
    got dry lips and heavy eye lids
    the clock is ticking, though
    seemingly in the right direction
    and i'm watching
    and wondering
    whose hand hovers above my head?
    I've given up all my possessions
    I've fed a starving child
    I've forgiven all of my enemies
    the world must love me now?

    There's a ringing from a church bell
    and an echo from the spires
    the second hand is empty
    while the minute hand complains
    the clouds are plotting drowning
    and the wind screams for revenge
    I have done these good deeds
    and filled the hours with myself
    if theres an eternity I've stolen from
    the world must love me now
  • Childrens Hour
    Childrens Hour Posts: 93
    wauw:) thanks, I love it
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.

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