Dreaming..:)

Childrens HourChildrens Hour Posts: 93
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I hope I can keep up with life
That I will walk in the right direction
I hope I can still run, when I have to
And that I'm always one step in front of the others
But for now
I will keep quiet
And slowly follow

I hope I won't be scared all my life
That I can make my dreams come true
I hope I will be loved
And that people won't try to hold me from living
But for now
I will try
And do the best I can

I hope these adolescent feelings won't last
That I will learn by not making any mistakes
I hope I will be completely me
And that I can live happy with that
But for now
I will consider this too damn idealistic
And that's why I keep on dreaming
with all the comfort and inspiration
I can find in this life
I'm living
۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
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  • it's quiet today..or is that just me..
    I'm bored..please read the poem:p
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    it's quiet today..or is that just me..
    I'm bored..please read the poem:p


    Hey, I read it. I assume as you said adolescent, that you are young. sounds a lot like what I used to write in highschool. Stick with it. It's great to get your thoughts and feelings out. Helped me so much through all those crappy teenage years. But just in response to what you were saying, life does get better. way better. And you can learn without making mistakes (well you can learn a fair bit) if you learn from other peoples mistakes. Good work :)
  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    sometimes life is a complete total bunch of crap......and it's torture......that's my two cents.....hell on earth......the sun shines occasionally......but mostly you feel like you're climbing some kind of never-ending glacier......and it's sheer torture......I've had my share of good days over the last year and a half......but whoever is tallying the books better remember......that my life is a complete fukkin joke......hope yours gets better......mine is a waste of fukkin disgust......I'm disgusted with my life.....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • pacifierpacifier Posts: 1,009
    ISN wrote:
    sometimes life is a complete total bunch of crap......and it's torture......that's my two cents.....hell on earth......the sun shines occasionally......but mostly you feel like you're climbing some kind of never-ending glacier......and it's sheer torture......I've had my share of good days over the last year and a half......but whoever is tallying the books better remember......that my life is a complete fukkin joke......hope yours gets better......mine is a waste of fukkin disgust......I'm disgusted with my life.....

    Woah. That's sad to hear. Hope things get better real soon. Sometimes I have really bad days when I feel like this and then the next day I could be fine. I went through a really bad period for a couple of years where I had gone past the stage of feeling upset or angry or afraid or tortured and gone to feeling numb to everything. which I sometimes think it is worse to feel nothing than it is to feel horrible, at least when you feel all the bad things you still get to feel. but I got out of that stage, you just have to live through it, and sometimes that can be the hardest thing, just staying alive, but there are things you can't see that th future will bring your way, if you can just wait. Life is crazy in that way. I hope good things are heading your way very soon.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    CH....

    good stuff....

    Everyone hopes their dreams will come true...

    And I'm sure yours will!!!!!!:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
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  • Ali wrote:
    CH....

    good stuff....

    Everyone hopes their dreams will come true...

    And I'm sure yours will!!!!!!:)

    I guess:)..Thank you all..

    and ISN, 'I'm disgusted with my life' is a beautiful sad thing to say..I really hope your life gets better, I will hope for both of us..:)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • theres a place for you in my songs
    without you i dont have a chance to play it
    theres a concert for us to play together
    its gonna last forever

    so dont tell me goodbye when i need to talk
    dont tell me i cant try to make it better for you
    when the lights shine on me
    im gonna hold you in my arms
    and we are gonna cry together


    dont say goodbye anymore
    dont say goodbye anymore
    dont say goodbye anymore
    thanks to everyone who can read what i write without having to say something mean
  • lovin kind wrote:
    theres a place for you in my songs
    without you i dont have a chance to play it
    theres a concert for us to play together
    its gonna last forever

    so dont tell me goodbye when i need to talk
    dont tell me i cant try to make it better for you
    when the lights shine on me
    im gonna hold you in my arms
    and we are gonna cry together


    dont say goodbye anymore
    dont say goodbye anymore
    dont say goodbye anymore


    ah, that's beautiful..:)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I hope I can keep up with life
    That I will walk in the right direction
    I hope I can still run, when I have to
    And that I'm always one step in front of the others
    But for now
    I will keep quiet
    And slowly follow

    I hope I won't be scared all my life
    That I can make my dreams come true
    I hope I will be loved
    And that people won't try to hold me from living
    But for now
    I will try
    And do the best I can

    I hope these adolescent feelings won't last
    That I will learn by not making any mistakes
    I hope I will be completely me
    And that I can live happy with that
    But for now
    I will consider this too damn idealistic
    And that's why I keep on dreaming
    with all the comfort and inspiration
    I can find in this life
    I'm living



    Adolescence is hard. It gets better. You will make mistakes (everyone does), it's ok to make them and good if you learn from them. Don't stop dreaming, it keeps your hope strong.
  • twin2 wrote:
    Adolescence is hard. It gets better. You will make mistakes (everyone does), it's ok to make them and good if you learn from them. Don't stop dreaming, it keeps your hope strong.

    Making so many mistakes isn't very hopeful, but I know it gets better so I go on and I'm pretty happy most of the time..My life isn't that hard but I just can't wait for my dreams to come true:)
    ۞Je houdt niet van haar omdat ze bijzonder is, ze is bijzonder omdat ze van je houdt,
    ۞Liefde is niet dat waarop het uitloopt, maar dat waarmee het begint,
    ۞Er is liefde en je begint een relatie om te zien of zij daartegen bestand is.
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