Starry Night

jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Starry Night
the moon was bright
All i could see
was meant for you and me.

The girl was crying
out there in left field
She thanked me so much
I smiled and said Take Care

Night out, fun was had
Special people reside
in little towns.
We talked the night away,
and connected from the get-go

Special people reside
in small towns.
Best friend
made me bawl,
cry like a baby
twice, each time I read her letter.

Mothers are dear,
hold them near.

Starry Night
xo
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  • brain of cbrain of c Posts: 5,213
    very good.

    And when no hope was left in sight.......
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    This one has such a sad feeling in it.
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Thanks brain of c
    and justam yes, a little bittersweet
    and a little adventure yesterday...:)
  • I love your beginning lines:

    "Starry Night
    the moon was bright
    All i could see
    was meant for you and me."

    What we percieve
    is what we believe
    and sometimes
    is all that we want see

    ....yet there is so much more out there
    beyond the moon, the sun, and stars
    Create Good Things........
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Holey, your last line has me thinking
    "Is there anybody out there?"
    just nod if you can hear me...
    sorry just playing around.:)
  • The Nod is the form of wave
    a tone, a melody, a harmony
    of the Greater Universe
    ...I wonder who's listening to us
    as we attemp the probe the physical
    the MetaPhysical and/or Spiritual has really. yet to be full explored


    ....and it's Right Here, in front of us :)
    Create Good Things........
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    let's not get too deep, Holey. :)
    just try to enjoy what you can...
  • I enjoy searching for ulitamate truth
    ...and I enjoy going deep as I can
    ......but keeping an eye on the surface
    ........and as high as I can

    ..............with at least one foot, on the ground :)


    Call me a Truth Seeker

    ...or a Root Stalker :)
    Create Good Things........
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