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Away

jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Brand new day
beginnings sway
time to walk this road
alone
I've travelled before


Brand new day
Waves come in motion
feelings are calmed
Time to ride this away

Brand new day
forever lost
with a new tide
coming in

Watch as the birds fly
Away,
just like you somehow.
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  • JamalJamal Posts: 2,115
    in aww, thank you so much for sharing
    especially like the ending
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Thanks.
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    very nice one jamam!

    I like it, fly like the birds
    be free
    I'ts a brend new day

    yeah!
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Thanks HG...:)
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    love it... ;)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    sweet.....;)
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    jamjam wrote:
    Brand new day
    beginnings sway
    time to walk this road
    alone
    I've travelled before


    Brand new day
    Waves come in motion
    feelings are calmed
    Time to ride this away

    Brand new day
    forever lost
    with a new tide
    coming in

    Watch as the birds fly
    Away,
    just like you somehow.
    i wish you the best of luck writing Jam,you are very talented!:D:)
    If you EVER need me to talk to,sweetheart,pm me.
    Keep your chin up....

    love to you and yours,
    your elder,

    allison
    ali:)
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    That is so sweet of you Ali!
    You're more talented! :D
    Thanks so much
    and much love back to you....:)
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