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Sunshine

jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
When you make me smile
I really smile
A warm, kind glow to this world
That's what you are
It's special to actually make people
feel good in times like these
Rainbow, shines
Special to make such a sad person
feel hope again and warmth
and have dreams while i'm awake
Those are the best kind. :)
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  • edablledabll Posts: 39
    Oh my gosh, I love this poem.

    Thanks for sharing!
  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    jamjam wrote:
    dreams while i'm awake
    Those are the best kind. :)

    hey, those really are the best kind...i have them a lot more NOW...i just had one...ha
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    hey, those really are the best kind...i have them a lot more NOW...i just had one...ha

    Good, Dream On!
    You had me singing Back in Black off and on last night!
  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    jamjam wrote:
    When you make me smile
    I really smile
    A warm, kind glow to this world
    That's what you are
    It's special to actually make people
    feel good in times like these
    Rainbow, shines
    Special to make such a sad person
    feel hope again and warmth
    and have dreams while i'm awake
    Those are the best kind. :)


    love it... :)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    short and sweet...I enjoyed this one :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • afanafan Posts: 59
    That was really a nice one.
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