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The 'Stream of conciousness' thread

TyeDyeTyeDye Posts: 19
edited March 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
OK this is a pretty simple excersize, read my sentence then post the first thing that comes to your mind....then someone reads the reply and posts the first thing that comes to their mind..... and so on and so on.

'Its particularly grey today, saturdays sunshine gave me false hope'.
Makes much more sense....to live in the present tense.
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  • FinsburyParkCarrotsFinsburyParkCarrots Posts: 12,223
    a hope a stuttered gasp a cry an exultation breathed in spectral streaked rain a promise an incidence a lambent spluttering of light seraphic and celestial godness multitongued and diaphanous in the piqued moment of oneness with all sound all colour before the final muted merge into neutral grey
  • james of beswickjames of beswick Posts: 17
    sorry you lost me there
  • TyeDyeTyeDye Posts: 19
    Gasping, dying, choking on a continuously bleak and smothering atmosphere. No end in sight, just more grey, more smoke, more death.
    Makes much more sense....to live in the present tense.
  • pearlmuttpearlmutt Posts: 392
    But then someone reminded me of that terrible, or was it terrific, who knows, how close, song. The one, something about the beauty of grey.
  • AmaterasuAmaterasu Posts: 317
    Grey made her go away for a day couldn't stand to see her shining pride.
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    Amaterasu wrote:
    Grey made her go away for a day couldn't stand to see her shining pride.
    She was proud of her autumn look in a salt and pepper grey sweater.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • kenny olavkenny olav Posts: 3,319
    Bibliobella wrote:
    She was proud of her autumn look in a salt and pepper grey sweater.

    Walking along the waterfront, she dared everyone she passed by not to smile at her, and one determined young man sardonically met her challenge.
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    Kenny Olav wrote:
    Walking along the waterfront, she dared everyone she passed by not to smile at her, and one determined young man sardonically met her challenge.
    and then he fell of the pier
    and she changed into her wonderwoman outfit
    and saved his life
    and the determined young man gratefully shook her hand
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    TyeDye wrote:
    OK this is a pretty simple excersize, read my sentence then post the first thing that comes to your mind....then someone reads the reply and posts the first thing that comes to their mind..... and so on and so on.

    'Its particularly grey today, saturdays sunshine gave me false hope'.

    i soak up the moisture in the air..
    although naught exists,

    and i am transported to some saturday in my youth,
    in the month of march..

    bitten by bitter winds,
    attempts to catch fly balls hit towards left field,
    what to do,
    what to say..

    it's too damn cold to enjoy this game,
    i dratherbee with an animal..
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • steppenwolfsteppenwolf Posts: 164
    blippity bloop bloop drip drop making change
    changalang
    i gotta get the fuck outta here
  • TyeDyeTyeDye Posts: 19
    steppenwolf wrote:
    blippity bloop bloop drip drop making change
    changalang
    i gotta get the fuck outta here

    Im leaving this dreary old town, Im going south for the summer, Ill catch some waves even though I cant surf.
    Makes much more sense....to live in the present tense.
  • HardtoImagineHardtoImagine Posts: 48
    TyeDye wrote:
    Im leaving this dreary old town, Im going south for the summer, Ill catch some waves even though I cant surf.

    these chains are gnawing my soul, they keep me from the summer surf, if i had scissors i would cut them and leave
  • Ms. HaikuMs. Haiku Posts: 7,265
    HardtoImagine wrote:
    these chains are gnawing my soul, they keep me from the summer surf, if i had scissors i would cut them and leave
    with scissors i cut then knot the last thread-given as a gift I will forget
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    tchaliz wrote:
    and leave it as a loose end, and the ever growing web waving it’s loose ends as petals will atract the thoughts of interneters flying around
    The world which we call home -as for what it is, was, and will be...for the future of us all rests on weary elbows
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
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