You

KovoKovo Posts: 255
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
....With you,
With you

With you it seems so real,
With you I can't help but feel
Alone.

With you I know my place,
With you I need to pace
The room.

I can't help but fear
The things that I can't see
So I can't keep you near
When what I fear is me.

Alone I walk this hall,
The path that leads to all,
Yet nothing.

Alone I think things through,
Alone, I am with you.
I need.

I can't stop your tears,
I can't set things right,
I can't hide my fears,
I can't hide tonight.

I can't live with you,
And its not living without,
I can't even keep you,
But I can't leave you out.
I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
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  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    Kovo wrote:
    ....With you,
    With you

    With you it seems so real,
    With you I can't help but feel
    Alone.

    With you I know my place,
    With you I need to pace
    The room.

    I can't help but fear
    The things that I can't see
    So I can't keep you near
    When what I fear is me.

    Alone I walk this hall,
    The path that leads to all,
    Yet nothing.

    Alone I think things through,
    Alone, I am with you.
    I need.

    I can't stop your tears,
    I can't set things right,
    I can't hide my fears,
    I can't hide tonight.

    I can't live with you,
    And its not living without,
    I can't even keep you,
    But I can't leave you out.
    very strong and powerful.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

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  • Alone, with you. This poem is full of sad confusion. I really liked it! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I too enjoyed this one. Well written.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Good one Kovo!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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