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KovoKovo Posts: 255
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I know you're reading this, so enjoy.

To everyone else, any suggestions to improve my writing?

I answer with questions
And I question the answers
We sidestep and smile,
Back and forth like dancers.
We bicker and laugh
But regret's never far.
And though we may try
We can't change who we are.
I'll always have patience
To listen and mend,
I'll be there forever
From now to the end.
So I'll continue to riddle
And question the time
While you question this poem
And ponder this rhyme.

G'night deary.
I shouldn't have to fight a battle I'll never win, just to lose those I've never had.
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I don't know what to say. I'm smiling though.

    I like this one. Witty.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • SmurfetteSmurfette Posts: 16
    One day I'll get it out of you...I know there must be an inspiration out there...heehee...love ya!
  • coachchriscoachchris Kelowna, British Columbia, Canada Posts: 749
    Well written. Short and sweet. Thanks for sharing!!
    Adolescence in essence is all about trust.
    Leaving is for the answering machine.
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