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Dreams of Red
Dreams of Red Posts: 203
edited January 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The intercoastal highway flows evermore---
With the sun's light---
Reflecting casts of brightness---
As brilliance is carried upon the road's waters---
In blue---
This skylight-mirror contains Everything---
Clouded---
Our metaphysical atmosphere reigns---
Rains of terror---
Versus falsehood and superficiality---
Where the whores of fame choke on the Beauty of the sea---
i'm a thief... and a liar...

see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
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  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Very descriptive and intense...good word usage. Good one! :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Dowecheatemnhow
    Dowecheatemnhow Posts: 158
    i liked that one a lot T. What inspired that if I may ask,...???
    I can hear what you're thinking,.. All your doubts & fears,... If U look in my eye,... In time you'll find,... the reason I'm here,.. In time U may come back somday,.. To live once more-- or die once more-- In time your time,... will be no more,...
    Johnny Cash (to Frank Castle/The Punisher)
  • Dreams of Red
    Dreams of Red Posts: 203
    twin1 wrote:
    Very descriptive and intense...good word usage. Good one! :)
    :)thanks:)
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....
  • Dreams of Red
    Dreams of Red Posts: 203
    Dowecheatemnhow wrote:
    i liked that one a lot T. What inspired that if I may ask,...???
    thank you... and yes, you may always ask: Every-thing.
    i'm a thief... and a liar...

    see Ed's church?--he's breathing fire.....

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